To examine the shortcoming or excellence of AI as a way to create film and story plots that work, I instructed an AI synopsis generator to create a storyline for me. The story synopsis at the top, below, is what the bot came up with. The synopsis under it is my version of it. Take a look at what I have done and ask why, and why it works to improve the AI synopsis. What's different? Do we see here one of the many reasons why so many bad stories get told in film and otherwise.